1. I could do with more of them lovely examples. I've only gotten three which I thought was over doing it but as my speech reviewer pointed out, I could do more of that. Maybe people like getting beat over the head with examples. I dunno.
2. I should probably start thinking where I'm going to incorporate my other media elements. Like I've only thought about the begining in terms of that. I honestly don't know how I'm gonna incorporate it into the rest.
3. The ending needs a good mount of work, I put my take away inside a paragraph that isn't a conclusion. So I should work on that to make it a better ending overall.
4. I've already got audience interaction down because of my millions of questions within the speech but I don't think I would have he audience paying that much attention over the time of the speech so Prehaps I should make a few jokes, like exaggerating the Russian stereotype for example.
That's all I got, ttyl
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